Poetry, Arts, and Publishing

Rap Scraps

So been thinking of doing beatboxing, rap, spoken word, such things of the like.

I got some poetry/lyric scraps here but need some help in finishing them.

"Time for War." (Unfinished)

One, Two, Three. Four.
It's time for war.

Five, Six, Seven, Eight.
It's time to annihilate.

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"Chemical Trap" (Unfinished)

Love is a
chemical trap.
That's why it has a
bad rap.

Cuz hun,
I fell in love with you.
But now
you're just making me blue.

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Mistress Nicotine (Part of my Intoxicant series/Unfinished?)

Hey girl.
let's set a date.
make it tonight.
set everything all right.

Girl,
Heard you were gonna
make me lean.
but you were
pretty mean.

Girl,
Heard you were
a harsh mistress.
You gonna cause
me
distress?

Girl,
you makin me broke.
Cause you wanna
make me smoke.

Girl,
I can't breathe.
You damn woman,
let me leave.

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Also going to illustrate my mistress nicotine pic.

So any comments?